The search for the magic spoon part 3As the guys head on up Pop is trying to think of what to do next.
Pro's: *Facedesks* Yet another job well done! (I also thank you for providing something to be critiqued, I've been wanting to Critique someone but I couldn't find much with all the visual artists...Anyway enough rambling on.) Chocolate probation? I'd hate that. I looooooove my chocolate! ....Oh right critique. As always MAGIC SPOON! You've kept me in the dark for how long? And a closet? Is this some kind of messed up/randomly amazing video game? Eh whatever it's always good to read your work.
Cons: The bad thing is not being able to found anything bad. Though I'm pretty sure there was one or two mistakes. Like you had 'stared' instead of 'started that bar fight' but I think that is about it.
Rating time!! (If I can remember how I do it. xD)
Over all: 26/30
Over all comment: Always a pleasure to read your work, I love magic and apparently magic spoons that otherwise don't exist in the real world, then again for all we know they could. o_o
But as always a great job.